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The Book Chapters that the draft scenes are to be based on, are published live for collaboration development purposes, with a sequence derived from the Chapters, supplemented with other (unpublished) writings as we progress. The final order for the proposed screenplay may be the subject of additional drafts to suit production of the final movie (producers/directors/actors). To be in a position to gain an idea of style and commercial value, please request a copy of our Kulo-Luna (draft) screenplay. See our terms and conditions. STOP PRESS: The Cleopatra script V.1 has been published on http://filmsactorsmoviestars.com.

[PLEASE NOTE: we're working on revising this Plot for V 2.0 and V 3.0 scripts focused on Cleo's preparations for the afterlife as per the Scenes below. We will then be considering a comic script adaptation using Final Draft. We are aiming for a revised scene sequence for May 2025 These Scenes are likely to change order as development of the story takes place.]

SECOND DRAFT - SAMPLE - FOR ADAPTATIONS

ANGEL OF DEATH - Anubis and Isis occupy Josef Mengele's and Adolf Hitler's subconscious as spirits steering their legacies.

WWII ENIGMA - The birth of computers at Bletchley Park under Alan Turing, code breakers, the Colossus and Adolf Hitler's Enigma

INNER CIRCLE OF SIX - Nazi funded medical human research laboratories Joseph Mengele's Fourth Reich escape to Brazil reserve plan.

BRAZIL BOUND - Doctor Death bargains for funding and logistics of relocation to Amazon South American base via Argentina.  

SCENE 1.  THE BATTLE OF ACTIUM - Queen Cleopatra retreats leaving Mark Antony to lose against Octavian and seek a new deal with Rome

SCENE 2.   THE POISON ASP - Hotfoot from Actium, Cleopatra's plan to seduce Octavian backfired leading to a suicide pact with Anubis and Isis

SCENE 3.   WRATH OF THE GODS - 365BC destruction of Thonis and Alexandria, Anubis and Isis watch on in horror as Cleopatra is submerged

SCENE 4.   NEW WORLD ORDER - A Neo-Nazi plan to regenerate Aryan supremacy, for doing good

SCENE 5.   THE AFTERLIFE - Cleopatra's tomb lay lost for centuries submerged and out of sight with little change of discovery

REBEL WITHOUT A CAUSE - Having reached the end of his PhD, William and Jane Bates have epiphanies, Will should follow his dream

ROADBLOCK - Nobody would fund his R&D, William and Jane Bates are blanked by DARPA, computer and software houses

QUANTUM LEAP - Jane and Will find backers, then US military and computer processor chip makers cyber attack, hack and bug them

EXIT STRATEGY - Realising they will always be a target from industrial and military espionage, Jane & Will devise a cunning plan

SCENE 6.   CYBERCORE GENETICA - Nano computer technology is purchased at an auction by a semi religious sect, New World Order

WASHING MACHINE - Inventor Franco Francisco comes up with the Incubus, artificial uterus concept while repairing his household appliance

PATENT APPLICATION - Franco Francisco files his Claims with the Italian Intellectual Property Office (IPO) in Roma, Italia

SCENE 7.   INCUBUS - Roberta Ferrara secures the expertise of Franco Francisco for knights of the New World Order: Neuwelt Rittertum

SCENE 8.   SPLICE - Klaus and Eva von Kolreuter find a way to live forever using cloning technology; Genonimo Investments, Geneva

SCENE 9.   TREMORS - Cleopatra's feels vibrations after a shift in the tectonic plates triggered a tremor off the coast of Alexandria.

SCENE 10.  PANAMANIAN RUNNING MAN - The secret is out, an enhanced human is spotted running at unbelievable speeds

MARJORIE BOYLE - Sam Hollis tracks down sexy backpacker, Majorie Boyle, to Brighton Point in Trinidad, beautiful Caribbean Island

THE ARK - NeuWelt Rittertum headhunt John Storm seeking access to his genetic DNA map of life on earth, but they fail to reach agreement

SCENE 11.  THE AMAZON - Charley agrees to meet John & Dan at Manaus, but is a little too inquisitive

OPERATION LEVIATHAN - New World Knights, Klaus and Franco go to Plan 'B' to track and steal the Elizabeth Swann & The Ark DNA database

SCENE 12.  TOMB RAIDERS - Safiya Sabuka and Musa Bomani dive among sifting sands to discover precious artifacts and golden treasures.

SCENE 13.  SCOTLAND YARD - The famous London DNA database is stolen, the biggest data heist to date. The Yard initiates a cover up

SCENE 14.  OPERATION ALEXANDRIA - Neo-Nazi occultists recover Cleopatra's sarcophagus from underwater tomb near Palace.

SALVAGE RIGHTS - Entering Cleopatra's mausoleum, locating sarcophagus and raising with air bags to the surface, Safiya Sabuka tomb raider.

COASTGUARD PATROL - Safiya and Musa surface off Alexandria to a waiting customs vessel, they pretend to be sports divers fooling the officials

SARCOPHAGUS OPENING - The wooden inner casket is opened revealing Cleopatra's mummy, golden crown and death mask, perfectly preserved

SCENE 15.  KIDNAP - Charley is taken prisoner but John rescues her, in the process becoming injected with a serum

SCENE 16.  UNESCO - Catholic Church fear grave desecration heritage theft, asks agencies for help. Interpol issue Red Notice.

AWAKENING - In the afterlife, the DNA extracted from Cleopatra's mummy triggers a divine stirring with Anubis and Isis comforting the Nile Queen

SCENE 17.  REPLICANT - The Society reproduce Cleopatra using Francisco's RepliVator™, uploading synapse sequence and implanted memories.

BRAIN CONDITIONING - Klaus and Franco upload digitally recreated memories in historical order to trigger correct learned synapse firing sequence

REBORN - The former Queen of Egypt speaks for the first time to her creators, proving that her brain is working, the implants succeeded

SCENE 18.  FULL STEAM AHEAD - Storm speeds to Thonis, then uses the Swann's AI sensors and the Ark database to find tomb has been plundered.

PROPOSAL - Baron von Richhofen's gambit, a union of Royal ancient and Aryan blood, for strength and intellect, a powerful heir as her successor

SCENE 19.  RITUAL SACRIFICE - The Baron prepares a drugged Cleopatra for ceremonial impregnation.

MANAUS TO ALEXANDRIA - A hydrogen powered race across the Atlantic Ocean in nine days, John Storm guided by Anubis and Isis

SCENE 20.  SANCTUM INTERRUPTUS - John finds secret Nazi hideout near Alexandria, disturbs ritual - rescues Cleopatra, arresting conspirators.

SCENE 21.  THE CHOSEN ONE - The reincarnated Cleopatra falls for her rescuer. John comes under her spell, despite her being a replicant.

SCENE 22.  MILITARY INTERVENTION - The military detain Cleopatra to appease stakeholders, despite media & medical protests. Storm distraught.

SCENE 23.  BATTLE ARMOUR - Thanks to some unexplained divine intervention, Dan Hawk talks John Storm into wearing a bullet proof suit.

SCENE 24.  GUANTÁNAMO BAY - History repeats itself, US military kidnap Cleopatra, John forced to rescue puts Elizabeth Swann at risk:  

MISSION IMPOSSIBLE - Commander John Storm, in Navy SEAL mode, attacks the Cuban torture camp at Guantánamo Bay, in stealth mode, black op.

MISSILE LOCK - USA military try to hack into Hal, anticipating a strike, as the DOD launch Tomahawks, John hacks into NORAD, and redirects them.

PRESIDENT LINCOLN TRUMAN - Hails the Swann to find out why John is shooting missiles at Guantánamo Bay, Storm sets the record straight. FINALE

FIRST DRAFT - SAMPLE

SCENE 1.  Alexandria, the site of Cleopatra’s palace, where she entertained Julius Caesar and Marcus Antonius (Mark Antony), two of the most prominent Roman generals in ancient history. This signaled the end of the Hellenistic (Ptolomic) dynasty in 30 BC, with the combined suicide of Marcus Antonius and Cleopatra after the naval Battle of Actium.

SCENE 2. The destruction of Thonis, sinking of the civilization.

SCENE 3. Cleopatra's tomb lay lost for centuries. Then one day a shift in the tectonic plates triggered a tremor off the coast of Alexandria, 

SCENE 4. A team of German archaeologists led by Rudolf Kessler .... great grandson of Leopold Reiffenstahl, a Nazi scientist who escaped to Brazil as World War Two closed in on Adolf Hitler's evil empire.

SCENE 5. A team of highly organized divers slowly uncovered sands to discover precious artifacts and golden treasures.

SCENE 6. Charley Temple alerts John Storm as to disturbing technology she has discovered in a village on the banks of the Amazon, that engineers enhanced humans. Storm is an amateur archaeologist, who has amassed a sizeable DNA collection that is stored onboard the amazing 'Elizabeth Swann.' An autonomous vessel powered by renewable energy, with onboard AI to assist the crew on their adventures.

SCENE 7. Franco Francisco, an Italian scientist had been perfecting his art, cloning large mammals, then finally managed to nurse a human embryo to fetus and birth. He was watched closely by a German cartel, he having published a paper on the possibility of digital reincarnation.

SCENE 8. The Brazilian technology is purchased at an auction by a religious sect, aiming to resurrect the last Pharaoh of Egypt.

SCENE 9. A US contingent had been shadowing the German contingent as they take more than a passing interest in these revelations, as they realise the implications.

SCENE 10. The Americans seek out John Storm, as an expert on DNA, who is well known for his conservationist views.

THONIS-HERACLEION was Egypt’s greatest port for much of the first millennium B.C. before Alexander the Great established Alexandria in 331 B.C. Then around 365 A.D. both cities vanished beneath the Mediterranean sea, hiding the location of Queen Cleopatra's tomb - confounding archaeologists - until now. REINCARNATION - Using the latest technology in super-computer genome mapping and digital DNA splicing, an occultist sect reincarnate Cleopatra VII, having found and recovered her sarcophagus from its watery tomb. The resurrected Queen has to mesh with the modern world she's been reborn into, where the Fourth Reich have plans for her future in a New World Order. But the CIA plot to kidnap the reborn Pharaoh to advance their military capabilities. Neither had reckoned on John Storm and his crew.

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