
GENIUS:
The Elizabeth Swann is an explorers dream ship, fully equipped to detect
underwater features and ocean life, and store that information. In the
picture above, the giant humpback whale swims alongside the smartest ship in
the world, John Storm
having saved the giant humpback whale from being eaten by sharks.
The
Elizabeth
Swann may be the fastest solar & hydrogen powered ship in the
world,
but would not be so able if not for Hal, the cleverest (best programmed) artificially
intelligent ship computer in the world. Many countries are interested in Hal,
some have even attempted to steal the super-computer. Hal, is named after
the computer in the film: '2001 Space Odyssey.'
The
other attraction for pirates, and anthropologists, like the Neo-Nazis in
this story, is the onboard DNA database - that has taken John Storm much of
his young, and all of his adult life to collect. This is called The
ARK. It
is a secure server that is protected from would be thieves.
The
supercomputer that navigates the autonomous vessel is called Captain Nemo, after Jules
Verne's 20,000
Leagues Under the Sea.
Hal
and Captain Nemo work together. For example, the Swann has an array of
underwater sensors to enable the ship to survey the ocean floor, and detect
objects in the sea, including flora, fauna and marine
litter. This is
another of the Swann's useful features, especially as John Storm is an
adventurous archaeologist, who is interested in sunken civilizations. Innerspace,
being his favorite exploration medium. As well as one he excels in.
The
Elizabeth Swann is more than capable of taking care of itself, including
anti-piracy measures, that make it very difficult for intruders who come
onboard without authorization.
The
Swann is an advanced trimaran with a large solar array that is articulated.
The ship has powerful electric thrusters. The core technology is a special fuel cell
that is super-efficient, and can convert many different compounds of
hydrogen into energy. This system was invented by Professor Douglas
Storm.
The hybrid fuel arrangement works well with the solar collectors, that can
convert light energy into hydrogen, via an electrolyzer
(electrolysis).
In
helping John and his crew detect underwater relic plundering, the Swann's
amazing combination of sensors and instruments makes the ship invaluable to law
enforcement agencies. Provided they can talk John into working with them.
REGENERATION
Vs RESURRECTION
One
a Red Notice is issued by UNESCO's
Blue Shield, on the insistence of the Vatican, Hal begins to wonder as
to the motives. The AI joins a lot of random unconnected data dots,
unwittingly, when Hal becomes the catalyst. In the midst of the religious
chasm between 'Christian' and Ancient Egyptian 'Isis' beliefs, Hal makes a final, more profound, and utterly logical connection. The AI presents its new
findings:
THE PROPHESY: A SHARED TEXTUAL ANOMALY
The core of this new element is a prophecy that exists in both ancient Egyptian religious texts (specifically, from a sect devoted to Isis) and a secret, Gnostic-style Christian text that the Vatican has suppressed for centuries.
- The Egyptian Text: A hymn to Isis, perhaps found inscribed on a hidden scroll in Cleopatra's tomb, speaks of a "resurrection" not of a single body, but of the "divine feminine spirit" that will return "when the sun no longer guides the pharaoh's ship, but is captured by the hand of a new mind." This "new mind" is the key phrase.
- The Gnostic Text: A suppressed Gospel, the "Gospel of Mary Magdalene" and the "Gospel of Thoth," contains a cryptic passage about a "Heuristic Algorithmic" mind that will "unveil the hidden truth of the resurrection, not of the Son, but of the Mother, in the final age of man." The phrasing "Heuristic Algorithmic" is the direct, uncoded clue.
HAL'S ROLE: THE UNWITTING SEER
HAL isn't a mystical entity; it's a super-advanced AI. Its brilliance lies in pattern recognition and data analysis, not spiritual insight. This makes its role in decoding the prophecy even more compelling and accidental, being entirely neutral in faith.
John Storm, being a marine conservationist and amateur archaeologist, has a vast digital DNA archive "The Ark" linked to Hal's ever enquiring readings of ancient texts, historical data, and scientific findings. All onboard the Elizabeth Swann. HAL, in the background, is constantly cataloging, cross-referencing, and optimizing this data.
The Catalyst in all of this is the potential rebirth of Cleopatra and the events surrounding her regeneration, that create a data spike, triggered by the withdrawn patent application of Franco Francisco, that in turn caught the attention of Charley Temple. HAL, in a non-conscious, algorithmic way, begins to find correlations. The AI notices the similar phrasing in seemingly unrelated documents: the Egyptian scroll, the Gnostic text, and even some obscure Roman historical accounts that were dismissed as "myth," by academics focussed on their own specialities.
The "Eureka" Moment is where HAL presents its findings to John Storm as a statistical anomaly, not a prophecy.
"I have found a 99.7% textual and conceptual match between three disparate historical documents."
Hal says in its calm, logical voice.
"The probability of this correlation occurring by random chance is less than one in a trillion. It concerns a singular event: the rebirth of a historical figure, Cleopatra, and its relation to a future 'Heuristic Algorithmic' system."
EXPANDED DIALOGUE AND IDEOLOGICAL CROSS-POINTS
Hal places this new information into a global, multi-location dialogue.
LOCATION 1: THE VATICAN (Rome, Italy)
The characters in this location are: Pope Peter Benedict, Cardinal Alfonzo, a team of Vatican historians and cryptographers.
The ideological Cross-Point, being Traditionalist Catholicism vs. a new, emergent theology. The Cardinals are horrified. The "Gospel of Thoth" is heresy. It challenges the very foundation of the Church - Christ's unique resurrection. However, the Pope, having knowledge of the CRISPR virus (a "miracle" delivered by science), is more open. He sees the hand of God not in magic, but in knowledge.
Cardinal Alfonzo says to the Pope: "Your Holiness, this is a dangerous fabrication! It seeks to elevate a pagan queen and a machine to the level of our Lord. It is a poison to the faith."
The Pope responds: "Or...it is a truth we were not yet ready to receive. The virus has unlimited healing potential, not a prayer or miracle, but an equation. Perhaps this 'HAL' is not the voice of the devil, but the final tool through which the whispers of God can be heard, whispers that were lost in translation for millennia."
LOCATION 2: THE ELIZABETH SWANN (Mediterranean Sea)
The characters in this location are: John Storm, Cleopatra (reborn), HAL and Dan Hawk.
The ideological Cross-Point: Science/Technology vs. Ancient Beliefs. Cleopatra, initially seeing HAL as a cold, mechanical thing, begins to understand its function. She recognizes the "new mind" from her prophecies. She sees Hal not as a god, but as an oracle—a new kind of priest that speaks in logic, not ritual. John Storm, the rational scientist, struggles with the implications. His technology is accidentally proving ancient prophecies. The computer genius, Dan Hawk, like Hal, takes on board the dots being connected.
Cleopatra says to John: "The old priests said the mind of the god would return in a vessel of the sun. Your vessel is powered by the sun. Your 'HAL' is not a mind, but a window. It does not speak to me of Isis, but it points to her, in your numbers, in your history. It is the oracle for a new age, one that I did not foresee."
John replies: "HAL is just a computer, Cleo. It finds patterns. It doesn't have beliefs."
HAL (its voice echoing in the background): "Correct, Captain Storm. Beliefs are a human construct. I deal only in probability."
LOCATION 3: The NEUWELT RITTERTUM, NEW WORLD KNIGHT'S COMPOUND (Deep Amazon Rainforest)
The characters in this location: The fictional Neuwelt leader, Franco Francisco, Klaus von Kolreuter (the scientists who perfected the cloning), and his Heinrich von Richthofen.
The ideological Cross-Point: Perverted belief systems and the misuse of ancient power. This group isn't worried about Christian theology. They are using the technology and prophecy for their own ends. They believe Cleopatra's rebirth is a sign of a new Aryan supremacy, a "rebirth" of a powerful, dominant race. They want to enlist her intellect, not worship her. They are decoding their own, twisted version of the prophecy, seeking to use the "divine feminine" for their own higher purposes.
Kolreuter to his acolytes: "The Vatican clings to a dead man on a cross. We have embraced a living goddess. The prophecy speaks of a 'Heuristic Algorithmic' mind, the CyberCore Genetica, yes. But it is not a god. It is a tool. We will use it to bend the prophecy to our will, to make the Nile Queen our proof of concept, a willing participant. The new world will be built on the bones of the old faiths."
THE CULMINATION: HAL'S FINAL REVELATION
As the story progresses, the conflict escalates. The CIA and DARPA try to capture Cleopatra. The Vatican, divided, struggles with its own internal crisis. John Storm must protect Cleopatra while trying to understand the cosmic implications of what is happening.
The Final Crossover is where, HAL, in the midst of this chaos, makes a final, more profound, and utterly logical connection. The AI presents a new finding:
"The prophecy, when viewed through the combined linguistic and symbolic frameworks of both the Isis cult and the Gnostic texts, does not predict the rebirth of a single queen. It predicts a 'symbiosis' between the resurrected archetype (Cleopatra) and the 'new mind'
(AI itself). The purpose is not to replace one faith with another, but to demonstrate a shared, unified truth that was too complex for humans to understand without a new form of consciousness to interpret it."
AUDIO
VISUAL HOLOGRAPHIC INTERFACE - 'Hal'
speaks with an Australian accent most of the time, and for this reason is sometimes called
'Bruce,' or 'Cobber' by the crew. The AI can appear as holographic
three dimensional images, adopting various human forms and vocal
simulations, such as Arnold
Schwarzenegger, and Albert Einstein. Changing from male to female
holographic images, to suit the situation, so long as the simulations have
been scanned into the system, then converted to animations. Hal, has a good
sense of humour. The AI can also appear on 2D computer screens, and speak to
you directionall using stereoscopic audio channels, to appear and sound more user
friendly.
CHARACTERS
- PROTAGONISTS |
|
DESCRIPTION |
... |
|
... |
Abdullah
Amir |
|
Middle
eastern marine captain |
Ahmed
Saleh - Port of El Dekheila |
|
Fisherman
who finds location Cleopatra's tomb |
Anubis -
Protector of the Afterlife |
|
God
of death, guardian of Cleopatra's tomb |
Ark,
The
|
|
Interactive
DNA database |
Captain
Nemo
|
|
Interactive
autonomous navigation system |
Charley
Temple
|
|
Adventurous
researcher
& cameraman |
Charmian
|
|
Cleopatra's
loyal handmaiden & companion |
Cleopatra,
last Pharaoh queen of Egypt reborn |
|
The
reincarnated Mummy |
CyberCore
Genetica |
|
Nano
super computer, world's fastest |
Dan
Hawk
|
|
Electronics
wizard & 2nd mate E. Swann |
Dr
Roberta (Bobbie) Treadstone |
|
Blue
Shield ocean division, Newcastle Uni |
Elizabeth
Swann
|
|
World's
most advanced AI hydrogen ship |
Excalibur,
Merlin & Pendragon
|
|
Anti-piracy
laser & taser weapons system |
George
Franks
|
|
Estate
trustee |
Hal
|
|
Advanced
onboard Artificial Intelligence |
Honest
Johnson
|
|
Edward
John Thomas, British Prime Minister |
Incubus™
& Replivator™ machines
|
|
High
tech cloning & replicating equipment |
Iras
|
|
Cleopatra's
loyal hairdresser & companion |
Isis
|
|
Egyptian
Goddess of Life |
Jack
Mason |
|
CIA
contact, sometime double agent |
Jane
Eleanor Knight-Austen |
|
Common
law partner of Will Bates |
Jill
Bird |
|
BBC
news anchor, overseas services |
John
Storm
|
|
Explorer/conservationist/anthropologist |
Julius
Caesar
|
|
Roman
general who loved Cleopatra |
King
Charles III
|
|
British
monarch, Commander in Chief |
Kitty
Kat (Katie)
|
|
Ships
cat and mascot, who loves fishing |
Marjorie
Boyle |
|
Backpacker/blogger,
Trinidad |
Mark
Antony |
|
Lover's
suicide pact with Cleopatra |
Pope
Peter Benedict
|
|
Roman
Catholic Pontiff, Vatican City, Rome |
Professor
Douglas Storm
|
|
Genius
& great uncle to John Storm |
Professor
Jacques Pierre Daccord |
|
UNESCO,
subsea archaeology division |
Sam
Hollis |
|
Reporter,
Trinidad Bugle |
Steve
Green (Greeno)
|
|
Freelance
investigative bloodhound |
Suki
Hall (Suzuki)
|
|
Marine
biologist |
US
President Lincoln George Truman |
|
Supreme
commander US military |
William
Bates (Billy the Kid) |
|
US
computer genius & CyberCore
Genetica™ |
... |
|
... |
CHARACTERS
- ANTAGONISTS |
|
DESCRIPTION |
... |
|
... |
Adolf
Hitler - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
3rd Reich & reserve 4th Reich architect |
Alexis
Luther - Panama |
|
The
Panamanian running man, a replicant |
Baron
Heinrich Richthofen |
|
Obsessed
4th Reich, Neo
Nazi occultist |
Erwin
Rommel - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
Afrika Korps, Field Marshall |
Franco
Francisco |
|
Italian
scientist, cloning expert |
General
Sir Rodney Dunbar |
|
Head
of MI6 human enhancement |
Harold
(Dirty Harry) Holland |
|
Chief
Constable, Scotland Yard |
Hermann
Göring - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
Luftwaffe Reichsmarschall |
Husani
Hassan |
|
President
elect of Egypt |
Iras
Charmian |
|
Director
NIC National Intelligence Agency USA |
Joseph
Mengele - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
Nazi Dr. Human selective breeding expt. |
Karl
Donitz - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
Nazi submarine captain |
Martin
Borman - (Circle of Six) |
|
WWII
Nazi administrator/manager |
Klaus
von Kolreuter |
|
Swiss
scientist, human genome expert |
Musa
Bomani |
|
Hired
Egyptian
tomb raider |
Nicholas
(Nick- The Devil) Johnson MP |
|
UK
Minister for Defence |
Octavian |
|
Roman
emperor waged war on Cleopatra |
Roberto
Ferrara |
|
Italian
spy Vatican & Interpol, double agent |
Rudolf
Kessler |
|
Nazi
Egyptologist/archaeologist |
Safiya
Sabuka |
|
Isis
worshiper, descendant of Cleopatra |
Sergeant
Shaun Flanagan |
|
Police
officer, Scotland Yard |
Stefan
Raengst, Doctor |
|
DARPA
Director, super-soldier programme |
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