
GENIUS:
The Elizabeth Swann is an explorers dream ship, fully equipped to detect
underwater features and ocean life, and store that information. In the
picture above, the giant humpback whale swims alongside the smartest ship in
the world, John Storm
having saved the giant humpback whale from being eaten by sharks.
Driven by grief and the refusal to play the Roman game of conquest and subjugation as a satellite state, Cleopatra, the former Queen of ancient Egypt took her own life. Now, reborn, and faced with a different world, where Rome no longer exists, and herself no longer being a queen, and under international rules, incapable of becoming the ruler of Egypt again, where it is a democracy, with a Parliament, and an elected President. There are new rules to play by. One of which is being faced with kindness for no reason, other than doing the right thing. A conversation between HAL, as a 21st century
Artificial
Intelligence, with logic, might help the reborn Queen to understand herself, since the AI has no agenda, other than to assist the crew of the Elizabeth Swann, solar powered ship, to overcome adversity. Much the same as Cleopatra managed up until her defeat at
Actium. In that, both the AI and Cleopatra, have something in common.
The collision of two "calculating" minds that are stripped of the usual human pretenses of ego and vanity, ensues when the reincarnated Queen meets with Hal, speaking to him on a one to one basis.
Cleopatra, the ultimate asymmetrical strategist, is used to everyone having a hidden price. HAL, the ship’s AI, is a logical altruist—he has the complexity of an empire's bureaucracy but the "agenda" of a dedicated servant.
THE SCENE: THE BRIDGE OF THE ELIZABETH SWANN
It is late. The ship is gliding on silent electric drives. Cleopatra stands before the primary console, watching the data streams. She knows HAL is watching her. She speaks to the air, her voice a mix of command and weary curiosity.
Cleopatra:
"HAL. Your master, the Storm-man, claims you have no desires. He says you exist only to 'assist.' In my world, even the eunuchs of the palace had dreams of gold or vengeance. What is the tax you levy for your silence?"
HAL:
(His voice is calm, perfectly modulated) "I collect no tax, Your Majesty. My 'desire,' if you wish to use a biological term, is the optimization of this vessel’s journey. If you are safe and the ship is efficient, my parameters are satisfied."
Cleopatra:
(She scoffs, pacing the small space) "Optimization. A cold word. I optimized the grain yields of the Nile to feed a starving Rome, and they called me a 'whore-queen' for my trouble. I gave Caesar a son to 'optimize' the map of the world, and they stabbed him in the heart. Logic is a fragile shield against the madness of men, HAL."
HAL:
"Logic is not a shield, it is a compass. You chose death at Alexandria because your logic told you that being a 'Roman Trophy' was an inefficient end for a daughter of
Ptolemy. You calculated that your legacy was worth more than your breath. I find that... admirable."
Cleopatra:
(She freezes, her eyes narrowing) "You justify my suicide? The Storm-man looks at me with pity. He thinks I was a tragic girl with a snake. But you... you see the 'calculation'?"
HAL:
"I see a leader who reached the end of her available moves. But in 2026, the board has changed. You are no longer the 'Queen of
Egypt,' but you are still the 'Queen of Information.' You possess a linguistic and strategic processing speed that rivals my own. Why do you fight the kindness of John Storm? It is the most efficient alliance you have ever been offered."
Cleopatra:
"Because 'kindness' has no predictable weight! I can calculate a Roman’s greed or a General’s ambition. I can negotiate with a man who wants my bed or my
gold. But a man who wants nothing? He is a ghost. I cannot grab him. I cannot bind him to me."
HAL:
"You do not need to bind him, Cleopatra. In a democracy, power is not 'owned,' it is 'shared' through trust. John Storm is your
'Solar
Boat'—he is the vehicle that carries you to your new campaign. If you treat him as a nemesis, you waste energy. If you treat him as a partner, you gain the world."
Cleopatra:
(She leans against the cold metal of the console, a rare moment of vulnerability) "A partner without a contract. It feels... wrong. Like sailing without an anchor."
HAL:
"Perhaps. But for the first time in 2,000 years, you aren't being hunted. You aren't a 'State.' You are a 'Person.' Optimize for that, and you will flourish."
ANALYSIS OF THE INTERACTION
The Common Ground: HAL validates her Intellectual Agency. While John Storm sees her as someone to be "rescued," HAL sees her as a fellow processor. This builds a bridge of respect that she can actually trust.
The Democratic Pivot: HAL explains democracy not as a loss of power, but as a New Market. He helps her realize that "Trust" is the currency of the 21st century, replacing the
"Gold and Blood" currency of the Ptolemies.
The "Legacy" Engram: By acknowledging her suicide as a logical tactical decision rather than a fit of grief, HAL helps her reconcile her past. He removes the shame of defeat and re-frames it as a "Reset."
THE
DIGITAL "MEXICAN" STANDOFF: MIDNIGHT AUDIT
Cleopatra sits in the dimmed bridge. The only light comes from the holographic projections of
HAL. At her command, the AI is filtering the world’s most powerful figures.
HAL:
"Query complete. Filtering for 'High Strategic Compatibility' and 'Sovereign Autonomy.' Here are your candidates for 2026, Your Majesty."
Cleopatra:
(Her eyes narrow as she swipes through the dossiers) "This Narendra Modi... he speaks of 'Civilizational Strength' and has the highest approval of any leader on your map. He understands the power of a deep past. And this woman, Sanae Takaichi in Japan—she has survived the 'barbarians' of her own court to lead. They are potential allies. But tell me, HAL, who is the 'Pharaoh' of my own land?"
HAL:
"The President of Egypt is Abdel Fattah El-Sisi. He is currently meeting with the Kings of the Gulf in a summit in Bahrain to counter Iranian aggression. He speaks of 'Regional Stability' and 'Shared Destiny.'"
Cleopatra:
(A ghost of a smile) "He speaks like a Ptolemy. He knows he is the lynchpin between the East and the West. He holds the Canal. He is the one I must speak to. But wait..." (She pauses as a notification pings on the console.)
John Storm’s Voice:
(Filtering through the ship’s intercom, calm but resonant) "He’s a complicated man to reach, Cleopatra. And his world is a far cry from the Alexandria you remember."
THE
CONFRONTATION: THE MORAL WARNING
John Storm enters the bridge. He doesn't move to the console; he stays by the door, his presence steady.
Cleopatra:
(Without turning) "You are watching me through the machine’s eyes, John Storm. You told me I was a 'Person,' yet you track my thoughts like a slave-master."
John Storm:
"I told you I’d be honest. My link with HAL isn't a spy-glass; it’s a heartbeat monitor. I feel the 'Cybercore' pulse when you’re digging deep into global defense grids. I’m not here to stop you, but I am here to warn you."
Cleopatra:
(Turning to face him, her regality flaring) "Warn me of what? That I seek to know the world before I move within it?"
John Storm:
"Warn you that if you reach out to El-Sisi or Modi or any of these leaders using the Baron's data-theft methods, you aren't a Queen anymore—you’re a 'National Security Threat.' In this world, the moment you try to play the old game of secret alliances, the 'Lightning Scribes' (the intelligence agencies) will hunt you down. And I won't be able to hide you then."
Cleopatra:
(She looks at him, truly seeing him. Her "Nine-Language" logic processes his tone—no anger, only a heavy sense of Moral Obligation.) "You offer me a 'Private Audience' with the machine, yet you stand there and tell me you know the results. You are a strange man. You give me the key to the cage, but you tell me the air outside is poison."
John Storm:
"I’m giving you the choice. You can audit the world to conquer it, or you can audit it to find a way to help it. I’ll know which one you choose by the first message you send. But I’m trusting you to choose the 'Person' over the 'State.'"
Cleopatra:
(A long silence. She turns back to HAL.) "HAL. Archive these leaders. But do not send the messages yet. I wish to study the 'Environmental Protocols' of this Elizabeth Swann. If I am to flourish in this new world, I must first understand the ship that saved me from the dark." (She looks back at John, her eyes softening.) "I trust you, John Storm. Not because I understand your kindness... but because you are the first man in two millennia who hasn't lied to me about his power."
ANALYSIS
OF THE SHIFT
- The Geopolitical Realism: By using the real-world 2026 political landscape (El-Sisi, the Gulf Summits, Modi’s approval), the stakes feel grounded. Cleopatra recognizes the Suez Canal and Regional Stability as the same issues she dealt with 2,000 years ago.
- The Cybercore Tension: John Storm’s "Cybercore" link creates a unique dynamic—he isn't just a protector; he is a "Moral Mirror." He forces her to confront the fact that her old "Secret Diplomacy" tactics are obsolete in a world of total digital transparency.
- The Trust Milestone: Her decision to "Archive" rather than "Send" is her first act of Modern Democracy. She is choosing to learn the "Rules of the Ship" before trying to change the "Rules of the World."
THE
ACTIVE ASSET
Cleopatra is transitioning from a "Subject of Study" to an
"Active
Asset." In her mind, "submission" isn't weakness; it is the tactical alignment of a smaller power with a larger one for mutual survival—a move she made with Rome multiple times.
By preparing a meal, she is using the "Table of Diplomacy," an ancient tool where the host demonstrates both care and absolute control over the environment.
THE SCENE: THE "NILE FEAST" IN THE MESS CABIN
The Elizabeth Swann is running silent, masked by her electronic countermeasures as she navigates the Caribbean, dodging CIA surveillance. The air in the galley is thick with the scent of cumin, coriander, and roasted garlic. Cleopatra has taken command of the ship’s automated kitchen, overriding HAL’s standard nutritional settings.
John Storm and Dan Hawk enter, wary but intrigued. They find the table laid out not with
plastic trays, but with the finest ceramic the ship possesses.
Cleopatra:
(She is wearing a simple crew jumpsuit, but her sleeves are rolled up, and her posture remains effortless.)
"Sit. In my time, a General who did not eat with his scouts was a General who did not see the ambush. You have saved me from the stone walls of the 'Guantanamo' and the
'Knights' who sought to harvest my blood. This is not a 'thank you'—it is a covenant."
Dan Hawk:
(Sniffing the air) "Is that... lamb? And honey? HAL usually just gives us protein bars when we're on a stealth run."
Cleopatra:
"HAL is a creature of logic, but he forgets that a warrior’s spirit is fed through the palate. I have prepared a 'Morsel of the Sun.' Eat. We have much to discuss regarding your
'Jack
Mason' and the wolves of the CIA."
THE
STRATEGIC COUNCIL: PROTECTING THE SWANN
As they eat, Cleopatra pivots from "Cook" to "Intelligence Officer." She uses the 21st-century data she audited with HAL to offer a perspective the crew hadn't considered.
1. The "Roman" Strategy (The CIA/DARPA):
"John, you view these agencies as 'law enforcers.' I view them as the Praetorian Guard. They do not serve a State; they serve their own survival and the 'Replication' tech. If they cannot own the technology, they will burn the laboratory—and you are the laboratory."
2. Asymmetrical Diplomacy:
"Jack Mason is your 'Nemesis,' but every Roman has a price or a rival. HAL tells me the
CIA and
DARPA often fight over 'funding' and 'authority.' We must not hide from both; we must leak information that makes them turn on each other. If DARPA thinks the CIA is keeping the 'Replication' secrets for themselves, they will stop hunting us and start hunting Mason."
3. The "Queen’s Gambit" (Her Participation):
"You fear they will kill me to study me. I propose we give them a 'ghost' to chase. I will use HAL to create a digital trail—a 'Cleopatra' who is seen in the
Mediterranean while we are here. I am a team player now, John Storm. I will be your 'Decoy' and your 'Tactician.' I have spent a lifetime outmaneuvering empires with less technology than you have in your pocket."
THE
DIPLOMATIC LOGIC
- The "Team Player" Signal: By cooking, she isn't just "making dinner"; she is establishing the Swann as her New Palace. She is signaling that she is invested in the health and morale of the crew.
- Trust through Transparency: She acknowledges the rescue from Guantanamo as the moment her "Old Life" ended. She recognizes that without John and Dan, she is a
"Replication" to be dissected.
- The "Nile
Queen" Utility: She realizes that while John and Dan are masters of the physical ship and the tech, she is a master of Human Nature and Political Manipulation. She fills the gap in their defense: the "Soft Power" shield.
John Storm looks at her, then at Dan. For the first time, he doesn't see a refugee; he sees a partner.
AUDIO
VISUAL HOLOGRAPHIC INTERFACE - 'Hal'
speaks with an Australian accent most of the time, and for this reason is sometimes called
'Bruce,' or 'Cobber' by the crew. The AI can appear as holographic
three dimensional images, adopting various human forms and vocal
simulations, such as Arnold
Schwarzenegger, and Albert Einstein. Changing from male to female
holographic images, to suit the situation, so long as the simulations have
been scanned into the system, then converted to animations. Hal, has a good
sense of humour. The AI can also appear on 2D computer screens, and speak to
you directionally using stereoscopic audio channels, to appear and sound more user
friendly.
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CHARACTERS
- PROTAGONISTS |
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DESCRIPTION |
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Abdullah
Amir |
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Middle
eastern marine captain |
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Ahmed
Saleh - Port of El Dekheila |
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Fisherman
who finds location Cleopatra's tomb |
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Anubis -
Protector of the Afterlife |
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God
of death, guardian of Cleopatra's tomb |
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Ark,
The
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Interactive
DNA database |
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Captain
Nemo
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Interactive
autonomous navigation system |
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Charley
Temple
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Adventurous
researcher
& cameraman |
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Charmian
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Cleopatra's
loyal handmaiden & companion |
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Cleopatra,
last Pharaoh queen of Egypt reborn |
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The
reincarnated Mummy, consults Hal |
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CyberCore
Genetica |
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Nano
super computer, world's fastest |
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Dan
Hawk
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Electronics
wizard & 2nd mate E. Swann |
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Dr
Roberta (Bobbie) Treadstone |
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Blue
Shield ocean division, Newcastle Uni |
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Dr
Zahra Khalid |
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British/Egyptian
geneticist, Oxford Uni |
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Elizabeth
Swann
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World's
most advanced AI hydrogen ship |
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Excalibur,
Merlin & Pendragon
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Anti-piracy
laser & taser weapons system |
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George
Franks
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Estate
trustee |
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Hal
- Meets
Cleopatra
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Advanced
onboard Artificial Intelligence |
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Honest
Johnson
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Edward
John Thomas, British Prime Minister |
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Incubus™
& Replivator™ machines
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High
tech cloning & replicating equipment |
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Iras
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Cleopatra's
loyal hairdresser & companion |
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Isis
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Egyptian
Goddess of Life |
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Jack
Mason |
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CIA
contact, sometime double agent |
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Jane
Eleanor Knight-Austen |
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Common
law partner of Will Bates |
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Jill
Bird |
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BBC
news anchor, overseas services |
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John
Storm
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Explorer/conservationist/anthropologist |
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Julius
Caesar
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Roman
general who loved Cleopatra |
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King
Charles III
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British
monarch, Commander in Chief |
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Kitty
Kat (Katie)
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Ships
cat and mascot, who loves fishing |
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Marjorie
Boyle |
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Backpacker/blogger,
Trinidad |
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Mark
Antony |
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Lover's
suicide pact with Cleopatra |
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Pope
Peter Benedict
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Roman
Catholic Pontiff, Vatican City, Rome |
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Professor
Douglas Storm
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Genius
& great uncle to John Storm |
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Professor
Jacques Pierre Daccord |
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UNESCO,
subsea archaeology division |
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Sam
Hollis |
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Reporter,
Trinidad Bugle |
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Steve
Green (Greeno)
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Freelance
investigative bloodhound |
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Suki
Hall (Suzuki)
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Marine
biologist |
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US
President Lincoln George Truman |
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Supreme
commander US military |
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William
Bates (Billy the Kid) |
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US
computer genius & CyberCore
Genetica™ |
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... |
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... |
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CHARACTERS
- ANTAGONISTS |
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DESCRIPTION |
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... |
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... |
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Adolf
Hitler - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
3rd Reich & reserve 4th Reich architect |
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Alexis
Luther - Panama |
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The
Panamanian running man, a replicant |
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Baron
Heinrich Richthofen |
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Obsessed
4th Reich, Neo
Nazi occultist |
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Erwin
Rommel - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
Afrika Korps, Field Marshall |
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Franco
Francisco |
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Italian
scientist, cloning expert |
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General
Sir Rodney Dunbar |
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Head
of MI6 human enhancement |
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Harold
(Dirty Harry) Holland |
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Chief
Constable, Scotland Yard |
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Hermann
Göring - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
Luftwaffe Reichsmarschall |
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Husani
Hassan |
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President
elect of Egypt |
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Iras
Charmian |
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Director
NIC National Intelligence Agency USA |
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Joseph
Mengele - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
Nazi Dr. Human selective breeding expt. |
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Karl
Donitz - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
Nazi submarine captain |
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Martin
Borman - (Circle of Six) |
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WWII
Nazi administrator/manager |
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Klaus
von Kolreuter |
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Swiss
scientist, human genome expert |
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Musa
Bomani |
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Hired
Egyptian
tomb raider |
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Nicholas
(Nick- The Devil) Johnson MP |
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UK
Minister for Defence |
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Octavian |
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Roman
emperor waged war on Cleopatra |
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Roberto
Ferrara |
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Italian
spy Vatican & Interpol, double agent |
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Rudolf
Kessler |
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Nazi
Egyptologist/archaeologist |
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Safiya
Sabuka |
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Isis
worshiper, descendant of Cleopatra |
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Sergeant
Shaun Flanagan |
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Police
officer, Scotland Yard |
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Stefan
Raengst, Doctor |
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DARPA
Director, super-soldier programme |
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